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diff --git a/writeup/writeup.synctex.gz b/writeup/writeup.synctex.gz
index a0143b8..82ce943 100644
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diff --git a/writeup/writeup.tex b/writeup/writeup.tex
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@@ -86,14 +86,6 @@ It is important that one does not confuse Free Software with software that is mo
 this is known as Freeware. Free Software defends the users rights to use and modify software and
 is not focused on its cost.
 
-The main goal of Free Software is to allow the user to have as much freedom as possible when using 
-a piece of software for any purpose. This is in contrast to the traditional alternative, called
-Proprietary Software, which can be defined as software that the user can not edit modify or 
-redistribute without the original publishers permission. This kind of software intentionally 
-restricts the users freedom, usually for the purpose of profit or control of the software. Some 
-common examples of Proprietary Software, are Microsoft's windows, Apple's iOS, and Google's chrome
-web browser.
-
 One should also note the differences between Free Software and Open Source software. In Open Source
 software, like Free Software, the original code for a program is available to anyone, however
 in Open Source, this is to better the projects development and usability, whereas in Free Software
@@ -101,14 +93,23 @@ it is to better the users freedom. They both use the same methods to achieve dif
 often leads them to be commonly used together, as the benifits a user gets from Free Software is 
 much the same in Open Source software, and vice versa.
 
-Many people don't know that they already use Free Software\cite{COMMONfoss}, but often there core 
-tools are Free Software, or are reliant on it. A few examples of this are, Dovecot\cite{DOVECOT}; 
+The main goal of Free Software is to allow the user to have as much freedom as possible when using 
+a piece of software for any purpose. This is in contrast to the traditional alternative, called
+Proprietary Software, which can be defined as software that the user can not edit, modify or 
+redistribute without the original publishers permission. This kind of software intentionally 
+restricts the users freedom, usually for the purpose of profit or control of the software. Some 
+common examples of Proprietary Software, are Microsoft's \textit{Windows}, Apple's \textit{iOS}, 
+and Google's \textit{Chrome} web browser.
+
+Many people don't know that they already use Free Software\cite{COMMONfoss}, but often the tools
+they use most often are Free Software. A few examples of this are, Krita\cite{KRITA}; a graphics 
+design and art tool that is used frequently in animation, and other digital art, is made and 
+managed by the KDE foundation\cite{KDE}, who make exclusively Free Software. Dovecot\cite{DOVECOT}; 
 an email server which some major email providers use and is Free Software and commonly used, 
-Krita\cite{KRITA}; a graphics design and art tool that is used frequently in animation, and other 
-digital art, is made and managed by the KDE foundation\cite{KDE}, who make exclusively Free 
-Software. A final example is Firefox\cite{FIREFOX} a Free Software web browser made by Mozilla 
-that makes up 2.71\% of the browser market share as of 2024, however in the past has had up to 
-30\%\cite{BROWSERmarketshare}.
+ A final example is Firefox\cite{FIREFOX} a Free Software web browser made by Mozilla that 
+makes up 2.71\% of the browser market share as of 2024, however in the past has had up to 
+30\%\cite{BROWSERmarketshare}.These are all more modern examples of Free Software, howevever over 
+the past 40 years, there have been countless others. 
 \section{A brief history of FOSS Software}
 \section{Examples of Free Software}
 \section{Comparing Free Software to its proprietary counterparts}