made a script to get the word count, and made a couple grammar fixes

5 files changed, 46 insertions, 49 deletions

diff --git a/writeup/wordcount.sh b/writeup/wordcount.sh
new file mode 100755
index 0000000..74eb254
--- /dev/null
+++ b/writeup/wordcount.sh
@@ -0,0 +1,2 @@
+#!/bin/sh
+detex writeup.tex | wc -w
diff --git a/writeup/writeup.fdb_latexmk b/writeup/writeup.fdb_latexmk
index 2c6952c..4577e92 100644
--- a/writeup/writeup.fdb_latexmk
+++ b/writeup/writeup.fdb_latexmk
@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
 # Fdb version 4
-["biber writeup"] 1729588878.08626 "writeup.bcf" "writeup.bbl" "writeup" 1729589715.21863 0
+["biber writeup"] 1729588878.08626 "writeup.bcf" "writeup.bbl" "writeup" 1729591643.13541 0
   "ref.bib" 1729588870.99657 1449 a3f0ab7bb3c44cd02d21710b757761cf ""
-  "writeup.bcf" 1729589714.94533 108202 713f7e89cfa7e41308b0a3930e57e51c "pdflatex"
+  "writeup.bcf" 1729591642.86149 108202 713f7e89cfa7e41308b0a3930e57e51c "pdflatex"
   (generated)
   "writeup.bbl"
   "writeup.blg"
   (rewritten before read)
-["pdflatex"] 1729589712.3782 "writeup.tex" "writeup.pdf" "writeup" 1729589715.21916 0
+["pdflatex"] 1729591640.44276 "writeup.tex" "writeup.pdf" "writeup" 1729591643.13594 0
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   "/usr/share/texmf-dist/fonts/tfm/public/cm/cmbx12.tfm" 1727349926 1324 c910af8c371558dc20f2d7822f66fe64 ""
   "/usr/share/texmf-dist/fonts/tfm/public/cm/cmcsc10.tfm" 1727349926 1300 63a6111ee6274895728663cf4b4e7e81 ""
@@ -195,12 +195,12 @@
   "/usr/share/texmf-dist/web2c/texmf.cnf" 1727349926 41588 b43d3e860a4f94167ee1e725ff526a72 ""
   "/var/lib/texmf/fonts/map/pdftex/updmap/pdftex.map" 1727772120.4956 5312047 b07fcd2a9090df96fc745b92a3db793b ""
   "/var/lib/texmf/web2c/pdftex/pdflatex.fmt" 1727771987 7112995 7933768d5ebcb328850d23523e531d79 ""
-  "writeup.aux" 1729589714.93866 2929 8afaf08bd88ee94b8a68b320503adf78 "pdflatex"
+  "writeup.aux" 1729591642.85483 2929 8afaf08bd88ee94b8a68b320503adf78 "pdflatex"
   "writeup.bbl" 1729588880.24318 5352 80afbf2ba482a46066785e611f86fb1a "biber writeup"
-  "writeup.out" 1729589714.94199 2704 95f0c4ce3cd9a116775bb333be4e9ea3 "pdflatex"
-  "writeup.run.xml" 1729589714.94866 2319 506c1b5fa918ae91afb2a783379dbdcd "pdflatex"
-  "writeup.tex" 1729589712.26534 5559 3257b6f9e41737a6eb91c9fa149e4963 ""
-  "writeup.toc" 1729589714.94866 1112 c7a3738c6b5464fbed6ab7b0d6b372c7 "pdflatex"
+  "writeup.out" 1729591642.85816 2704 95f0c4ce3cd9a116775bb333be4e9ea3 "pdflatex"
+  "writeup.run.xml" 1729591642.86149 2319 506c1b5fa918ae91afb2a783379dbdcd "pdflatex"
+  "writeup.tex" 1729591641.32816 5533 1c7e5d4ed704c5ddd38149a686899557 ""
+  "writeup.toc" 1729591642.86483 1112 c7a3738c6b5464fbed6ab7b0d6b372c7 "pdflatex"
   (generated)
   "writeup.aux"
   "writeup.bcf"
diff --git a/writeup/writeup.log b/writeup/writeup.log
index 86cccde..5ec3171 100644
--- a/writeup/writeup.log
+++ b/writeup/writeup.log
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
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@@ -814,24 +814,24 @@ Package biblatex Warning: 'babel/polyglossia' detected but 'csquotes' missing.
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 Package biblatex Info: Trying to load bibliographic data...
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@@ -882,7 +882,7 @@ Package biblatex Info: Reference segment=0 on input line 35.
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 \@outlinefile=\write6
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 \tf@toc=\write7
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+Overfull \hbox (7.7536pt too wide) in paragraph at lines 123--123
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diff --git a/writeup/writeup.synctex.gz b/writeup/writeup.synctex.gz
index 05166dd..a0143b8 100644
--- a/writeup/writeup.synctex.gz
+++ b/writeup/writeup.synctex.gz
diff --git a/writeup/writeup.tex b/writeup/writeup.tex
index ab3cbdb..7063986 100644
--- a/writeup/writeup.tex
+++ b/writeup/writeup.tex
@@ -20,12 +20,7 @@
 {}
 {0em}
 {}[\titlerule]
-\geometry{
-        a4paper,
-        total={170mm,257mm},
-        left=25mm,
-        right=25mm,
-}
+\geometry{a4paper,total={170mm,257mm},left=25mm,right=25mm,}
 
 \author{Lucas Standen}
 \title{WORKING TITLE: Why FOSS software is preferred in the 
@@ -93,17 +88,17 @@ is not focused on its cost.
 
 The main goal of Free Software is to allow the user to have as much freedom as possible when using 
 a piece of software for any purpose. This is in contrast to the traditional alternative, called
-Proprietary Software, which can be defined as software that the user cant edit modify or 
+Proprietary Software, which can be defined as software that the user can not edit modify or 
 redistribute without the original publishers permission. This kind of software intentionally 
 restricts the users freedom, usually for the purpose of profit or control of the software. Some 
 common examples of Proprietary Software, are Microsoft's windows, Apple's iOS, and Google's chrome
 web browser.
 
-One should also note the differences between Free Software and Open Source software. In open source
+One should also note the differences between Free Software and Open Source software. In Open Source
 software, like Free Software, the original code for a program is available to anyone, however
 in Open Source, this is to better the projects development and usability, whereas in Free Software
 it is to better the users freedom. They both use the same methods to achieve differing goals; this
-often leads them to be commonly used together, as the freedoms a user gets from Free Software is 
+often leads them to be commonly used together, as the benifits a user gets from Free Software is 
 much the same in Open Source software, and vice versa.
 
 Many people don't know that they already use Free Software\cite{COMMONfoss}, but often there core 
@@ -111,8 +106,8 @@ tools are Free Software, or are reliant on it. A few examples of this are, Dovec
 an email server which some major email providers use and is Free Software and commonly used, 
 Krita\cite{KRITA}; a graphics design and art tool that is used frequently in animation, and other 
 digital art, is made and managed by the KDE foundation\cite{KDE}, who make exclusively Free 
-Software. A final example if Firefox\cite{FIREFOX} is a Free Software web browser made by Mozilla 
-that makes up 2.71\% of the browser market share, however in the past has had up to 
+Software. A final example is Firefox\cite{FIREFOX} a Free Software web browser made by Mozilla 
+that makes up 2.71\% of the browser market share as of 2024, however in the past has had up to 
 30\%\cite{BROWSERmarketshare}.
 \section{A brief history of FOSS Software}
 \section{Examples of Free Software}