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 are always being made, with the advancements in AI, including the first open models and frameworks, such as Llama; new IDE's and improving features in existing
 ones, for example vim getting full/improved LSP features.
 
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 \section{Closing thoughts}
-After reading this paper, one can hopefully see there is some benefit to the use of free software by development and privacy experts, as it clearly tends
-more to their needs, and is developed with them in mind, unlike alternative proprietary software software. It is clear that it is a growing space, with
-more people entering, including non technical users, only getting better for specific use cases and more generic ones.
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+\subsection{A needed critisim}
+On a last note, it is important to look at the overall draw-backs accociated with FOSS projects, while they do develope at a faster speed
+and almost always put their users first, it should not be overlooked that FOSS projects are less stable in overall development, sometimes disapearing due to only
+having small development teams working on them. This is not to say to never use FOSS projects but a point to be considered.
+
+\subsection{My personal thought}
+After reading this paper, one can hopefully see there is some benefit to the use of free software by developers and privacy experts, as it clearly tends
+more to their needs, and is developed with them in mind, unlike alternative proprietary software. It is clear that it is a growing space, with
+more people entering, including non technical users, only getting better for specific use cases and more generic ones even given the draw-backs previously mentioned.
+
+For me FOSS has become the only way I enjoy computers, I have found the projects I like to use, made friends, and bettered my skills as a developer. It keeps me in control.
 
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