From 68cbe74db953aa7592b9de604ef6050f16cd523a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: thing 1 <thing1@seacrossedlovers.xyz>
Date: Tue, 17 Dec 2024 10:37:55 +0000
Subject: made a couple new paragaphs

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@@ -342,7 +342,11 @@ as restricting what individuals make and share, would end up making many things
 Tor can exist. 
 \section{Where else is Free Software used and why?} 
 Free Software is used in many places, it is versatile, and easy to modify, which is ideal for most corporate situations or public 
-services. For example Free Software is in libraries to allow for easy management of books and databases. 
+services. For example Free Software is in libraries to allow for easy management of books and databases\cite{LIBRARIESFOSS}. In libraries,
+it has made it easier to manage compared to alternatives, and people have been doing this for many years, via freeware and shareware, bother
+older examples that are similar to Free Software.
+
+Another example is in the energy sector\cite{ENERGYsector}, where it is used 
 
 \section{What's next for the Free Software space?} 
 \section{Final thoughts}
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